Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Humanities course helps in understanding of human nature, behaviour and pyschology. All these factors can help not just business or science student about everybody for their future careers. Humaninties and all other courses go hand in hand each course has something to gain from other.
Students who are studying business can be benefitted from this course in many ways such as, Marketing tacts can be learnt simply by understanding the nature of human behaviour. We can understand this with the help of an example of "John" and "Kevin" two employees of a clothing company. Both John and Kevin were given same task by their boss to sell clothes of there brand to as many customers as they can. John uses a simple strategy of advertisements in which prints out an ad and delivers it to households in his area. This strategy is old but an effective one many people do show up to buy their brand's clothes. On the other hand, Kevin uses a guireilla marketing strategy where he, understands all trends, designs the teenagers, adults use in there quixotic life and he amplifies the daily clothing. As soon as, people clothes designed by Kevin they are spellbound by it, the clothes are nothing to gauche on the contrary perfect mix of fashion and daily lifestyle.
Science students can also take advantage of humanities courses. As we know, humanities tells us about pyschological behaviour science students can help in
making specialized courses for kids, adultss who are affected by ADHD so, that they can learn all things which cannot be taught to them in regular curriculum. Research from Paris University has concluded that pepole who major in humanities and science are avid learners and more deliberate thinkers. The thought process of these people is changed by combination of both the courses offered simultaneously.
I, disagree with given statement "Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won't benefit their future careers" by the precedence of business students above we are able to know how humanitites course can make a certain change in lifestyle of general public and science student have also vastly benefitted from it. Researchers from known universities such as Cambridge, British Columbia are also bolstering majors in humanities to help understand basin need of behaviour and pyschology.
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is y instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 50
- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won t benefit their future careers 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21573604061 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99670105577 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555837563452 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.1174541564 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.4375 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374247403754 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113066565557 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140466175259 0.0758088955206 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230939685948 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154582457036 0.0667264976115 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.