To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

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To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Submitted by beginner on Tue, 06/28/2016 - 10:48

A society is build up of diverse cultures and tradition. These tradition or culture can be found any part of the country or society. In order to study a society we need to visit or study every aspects of the society; it is not necessary that only the major cities will depict each and every aspect of the society. A society will have a wide range of histories, that needs to be explored or that needs to be brought focus on.
Major cities will describe the contemporary life, or how well a society is economically developing; but these cities won't display every aspects of the society. It will be more focused on the "developing" aspects or on the "new trends" of the society. A good example for this fact would be the city which never sleeps, i.e. "Mumbai". Mumbai is known for its ongoing-life, never stopping life or the city where all the stardom resides, or one of the advancing cities in India. It best describes the economical life and the most vivid life, but it is also it that only Mumbai city, itself won't be enough to describe the true cultures of the India. But in Mumbai most of the people are not aware of their true culture or traditions. In the city of lights, the traditions are getting faded.
Some of the cities preserve the true traditions and cultures of the society, but the sad facet is that these cities gets hidden by the glam of the advancing cities; such cities can also depict one of the most important characteristics of the society. For instance, India is such a diverse country, some of its cities like Hampi,Tirupati.varoda,Leh Ladakh,etc. show how culturally and traditionally adverse we are and also how beautiful and adventurous these places can be.
Hence, it’s not enough that one needs to understand the most important characteristics of major cities of a society, in order to study it. One needs to know how diverse a society’s culture and tradition are, as in the end a society will only be remembered by its tradition and culture.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this tradition' or 'These traditions'?
Suggestion: This tradition; These traditions
...d up of diverse cultures and tradition. These tradition or culture can be found any part of the...
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Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... cities in India. It best describes the economical life and the most vivid life, but it is...
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Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...s, the traditions are getting faded. Some of the cities preserve the true traditions and...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Tirupati
...e country, some of its cities like Hampi,Tirupati.varoda,Leh Ladakh,etc. show how cultura...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Leh
...of its cities like Hampi,Tirupati.varoda,Leh Ladakh,etc. show how culturally and tra...
^^^^
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...es like Hampi,Tirupati.varoda,Leh Ladakh,etc. show how culturally and traditionally ...
^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for instance']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226221079692 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.143958868895 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0745501285347 0.0880659088768 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0514138817481 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0334190231362 0.0444667217837 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107969151671 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0308483290488 0.0406280797675 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83374570053 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0205655526992 0.030933414821 66% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.133676092545 0.0997080785238 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231362467866 0.0249443105267 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0179948586118 0.0148568991511 121% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1978.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 349.0 452.878318584 77% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6676217765 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297994269341 0.366273622748 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220630372493 0.280924506359 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146131805158 0.200843997647 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0916905444126 0.132149295362 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83374570053 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 219.290929204 68% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429799426934 0.48968727796 88% => OK
Word variations: 43.4591438164 55.4138127331 78% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5294117647 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4029619581 59.4972553346 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.352941176 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.674092028746 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 42.592449014 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.59550561798 1.64882698954 97% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444856849922 0.391690518653 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.163057153636 0.123202303941 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101801691515 0.077325440228 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.551997465328 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181816987767 0.149214159877 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187608329934 0.161403998019 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107775329213 0.0892212321368 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.448421189635 0.385218514788 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.08329381938 0.0692045440612 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335093024968 0.275328986314 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031623029794 0.0653680567796 48% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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