To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
society is a very important part of our civilization as it symbolizes advancement in our culture as compared to pre historic era.
The prompt states that to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. I strongly disagree with this prompt because of 2 reasons.
Understanding the characteristics of a society just by studying it’s major cities is actually a very bad idea because different cities have different cultures and studying each and every culture of different cities and trying to characterise them into one to identify them as a society of a certain kind will be wrong. For instance a particular city of a country doesn’t allow petrol or diesel cars but a different city of the same country allows it.From this example I am trying to form an idea and that is it is very complex and tedious process to form a characteristics just by looking at the the society from the above. We have to take a deep dig into the society to know what actually the situatio is.
Many people might argue that the city of a country reflects how people of the society really are but it’s not true there might be a possibility that the people living in that city are living in a fear of high punishment imposed by the government. All the architectures of the city are generally done by a group of architects without taking any permission from the common people and there are some cases where people opposed it and they are called rebels.
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- To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develo 50
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Society
society is a very important part of our civiliz...
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Suggestion:
...ulture as compared to pre historic era. The prompt states that to understand the...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: IT_IS[21]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...teristics of a society just by studying it’s major cities is actually a very bad ide...
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Suggestion: From
...rent city of the same country allows it.From this example I am trying to form an ide...
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Line 9, column 556, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a characteristic' or simply 'characteristics'?
Suggestion: a characteristic; characteristics
...ery complex and tedious process to form a characteristics just by looking at the the society fro...
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...edious process to form a characteristics just by looking at the the society from ...
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Suggestion: the
...m a characteristics just by looking at the the society from the above. We have to take...
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Suggestion: the; the
...m a characteristics just by looking at the the society from the above. We have to take...
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...e are some cases where people opposed it and they are called rebels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, really, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 260.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82307692308 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81811553133 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526923076923 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.8403263385 60.3974514979 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.75 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195883995445 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089545010789 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732302550233 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117944946902 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791924646843 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.