To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
he development of cities is in general reflected by social interest, and therefore it is contentious that studying major cities allows one to understand the crucial aspects of a society. Although it is true that some important characteristics of a society unveils itself through the composition of major cities, I adamantly disagree with the statement that the most crucial characteristics of a society can be assessed by examining its major cities.
Granted, cities often reflect a variety of socio-economic complexion. For example, although metropolices seem identical at a first glance, there are some unique and whimsical characteristics that reflects some essential characteristics of a society. Take Tokyo, the capital of Japan, for example. The various aspects of Tokyo reveals the unique facet of the society. For example, in Tokyo, there are trashcans everywhere, revealing the social demand of Japanese on cleaning the street. Furthermore, although Tokyo is famous of its anime(Japanese soap opera animation)-aficionado, the shopping district of the anime products are isolated to other district, alluding the underlying social abomination on those anime-aficionados. Likewise, one can often infer some crucial characteristics of a society from the composition and the form of its major cities.
However, analyzing major cities does not always reveal the most important social aspects. This is because cities are not the instantaneous image of the present, but rather the accumulation of the social ethos from the past to the present. Take Paris as an example. Arguable as it may, I think that one of the most important characteristic of France is their admire for the freedom and equity. On the contrary, Paris-the capital of France- still has an extravagant palaces and monuments that were built by aristocrats, which are diametrically different to the aforementioned aspects of France.
Furthermore, it should be noted that extending the parochial characteristic of major cities cannot be generalized to the general characteristics of a society. In case of dealing with Tokyo and the above-mentioned social detestation towards anime-aficionados, it is far-fetched to conclude that the ambience should be the same for the entire country, since there always remains the possibility that the ambience is minor throughout the entire society.
In brief, although some of the social characteristics can be extracted from various aspects of major cities, the most important characteristics cannot be assessed solely from major cities, in that major cities are not the reflection of the current society and that they do not represent the entire country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he development of cities is in general ref...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...the entire society. In brief, although some of the social characteristics can be extracted...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in brief, in general, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53808353808 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41035127331 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.9 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9213902888 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.588235294 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211698164984 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716298684445 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532946918447 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131725641717 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575055534017 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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