To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The study of society to known its importance and characteristics every is responsible in the community. one must take a stand of the society to keep up and advocate the society. the person should know all kind responsibilities to handle for every cities with easy and simple way. i agree to the above sentence.
The society people should choose a correct person to stand for them in every critic condition. all of them are responsible for what happens in the society. for instance our state is under the control of president, he should what rules and regulations should pass for public in critics conditions. if he is not responding are unable to handle the city, we are the people should stand a stand and question to him. he must and should be known the study of cities and to handle the public if not he is not the correct person for society.
he must know to deal to with the society if not, should study the major characteristic of cities. the should be honest towards public and good fame should continue. so that people can choose more several times by his affections towards public. today youngsters are tomorrow citizens. the youngsters should take role model of that person by seeing his dedication, affection and responsibilities towards the society. the children's learn from elders people. how the society is, based on that every children carrier and behaviour is base. if they are in the good environment or society then they will be in good position. infants are fastly attracted to the society and cities based on their society culture the future is based of every infants.
In a nutshell, i agree to the above sentence. one should known the major characteristics of the society and should be a role model for future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7880794702 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73787201315 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427152317881 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6342772954 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.3 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.21951772744 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164955334577 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605161019015 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056886498488 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133164514012 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624072453001 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.