The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Parkville Daily newspaper.
"Throughout the country last year, as more and more children below the age of nine participated in youth- league sports, over 40,000 of these young players suffered injuries. When interviewed for a recent study, youth-league soccer players in several major cities also reported psychological pressure exerted by coaches and parents to win games. Furthermore, education experts say that long practice sessions for these sports take away time that could be used for academic activities. Since the disadvantages outweigh any advantages, we in Parkville should discontinue organized athletic competition for children under nine."
The past year nation as progressively infant take part in athletics and undergo wound. The recent research participant a large town journalism emotional force from guides and co-parent to succeed in sports.schooling authority utter to conservation on academics spending more time in sports. The Parkville must be deduction conducting sports competition for infants.
most of the institutions prefer both academic activities and athletics. The organizations should keep strict rules, eligible students from the age of 15 and above not below 15. such as most of the children can handle the situation when they get injured, infants they are unable to take part in. I have some infants participating in competitions only because of parents and coaches force. And it's not the correct age for infants to take part, parents should think over this statement and care for their children. The schools concentrate on academics for infants, and can think about indoor sports to improve young children and relax. The institutions should not encourage this kind of competition for infants. The adults are stronger than the infants, the age factor plays an important role in any of the events. The academic is an important factor, most of the students neglecting their studies by spending more time practicing sports, the education system should focus on the academics, by proper time management. The athletics are also important at the same time the education is also important today.
The institutions should not encourage the athletics and competitions under the age of nine years, the age factor should be mandatory for any competitions. The Parkville discontinuing the organizing games competition for infants. Every nation should encourage this statements for infants.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Minimum four paragraphs wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 275 350
No. of Characters: 1459 1500
No. of Different Words: 137 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.072 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.305 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.912 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.038 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.362 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.478 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...academics spending more time in sports. The Parkville must be deduction conducting ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...ting sports competition for infants. most of the institutions prefer both academi...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...m the age of 15 and above not below 15. such as most of the children can handle the ...
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Line 3, column 711, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... this kind of competition for infants. The adults are stronger than the infants, t...
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Line 3, column 814, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...an important role in any of the events. The academic is an important factor, most o...
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Line 3, column 1017, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e academics, by proper time management. The athletics are also important at the sam...
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Line 3, column 1106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the education is also important today. The institutions should not encourage th...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ucation is also important today. The institutions should not encourage the a...
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Line 6, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould be mandatory for any competitions. The Parkville discontinuing the organizing ...
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Line 6, column 260, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... infants. Every nation should encourage this statements for infants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 13.6137724551 7% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 28.8173652695 31% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 275.0 441.139720559 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42909090909 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96131755354 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 705.55239521 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.76447105788 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5336264031 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 23.324526521 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.70786347227 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103978308544 0.218282227539 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347927713013 0.0743258471296 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025395762711 0.0701772020484 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075351130374 0.128457276422 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163614945651 0.0628817314937 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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