To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Every society has its own cultural heritage, norms. A society comprises its own set of rules, rituals and cultures. To conduct a study on a society different aspects are taken into account. A society is based on a locality or a country. According to the author, to understand a society, one must study its major cities. I mostly agree with prompt. However, it is true that a society can change in future but its cities may stay the same.And as a society change, new customs,rules, rituals can arrive at that place and my vanquish the ramnants of the past one. To support my thesis, I am giving three reasons and expatiating them in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, a society comprises of norms, culture, set of rules and regulation. And a society is build upon a geographic area that may comprises a single city or more cities.
And to understand their characteristcs, one need to look upon their norms, culture and how they behave communally. And also when a society established once, its characteristics started to show up in its major cities. For example, during premodern ages, agriculture was the only means of living for human. They cutivated lands and harvest crops. They build up in a common place "city" where they dwelled their corps and other foods. Back then major cities were the center for agricultural business. Farmers from everywhere came into the city and sold their corps. Back then cities only focused on agricultural food development. Another example can be, french society adorn culture specially art from the early ages. The city of france clearly manifest its characteristic. From the above examples we can scrutinize that to understand a characteristic of a society one should study its major cities.
Secondly, major cities comprise of the cutlure of a society . For example, Venice in italy has always been portaryed as a city of tranquility that also reflects its people and their culture. Another supporting example can be, Medina in saudi arabia is the center for arab Muslims. From the time where Prophet Muhammad conquer the city it became the center for muslim society. And major muslim culture were later built based on that society. Clearly today Medina city reflect the characteristic of that society.
However, it is not always true that city represents it society characteristics. A society may be banished for many reasons with no relics. So the argument may not hold always true.
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develo 50
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develo 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...future but its cities may stay the same.And as a society change, new customs,rules,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00491400491 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83473975373 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511056511057 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2708817122 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.9 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5666666667 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.76666666667 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.83258426966 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22209766838 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645353269202 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484812848528 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121561249167 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474393925518 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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