To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
The prompt which talked about studying the major cities of a society as a means of understanding it’s major characteristics is flawed and this is due to numerous reason which would be explained as follows
First and foremost, in understanding anything at all, the entirety of that thing has to be examined in order to come to a non biased and thorough conclusion. That being said, examining just the major cities defeats this ideology as it makes way for loopholes in the derived conclusion.
The inferior or minor cities usually have a big impact they play in a society and any attempt to study the society without giving them a go leads to a crocked conclusion.
Secondly, looks they say can be deceiving, this is true in that the minor cities are the pre cursors of the major cities, there can not be a minor cities without the minor cities as the most important production activities are carried out there, some of these included the livestocks and other necessary need which are important for the day to day actvivites of a society
In conclusion, all activities do not start and end in the major cities, the minor cities are not a figure head and they the roles they play can not be underestimated, they should there be studied as a means of understanding and getting to a through conclusion about the characteristics of a society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: its
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...g has to be examined in order to come to a non biased and thorough conclusion. Th...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'city'?
Suggestion: city
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...r the day to day actvivites of a society In conclusion, all activities do not sta...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: FIGURE_HEAD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'figurehead'?
Suggestion: figurehead
...ajor cities, the minor cities are not a figure head and they the roles they play can not be...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: THROUGH_THOROUGH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thorough' (accurate, exhaustive)?
Suggestion: thorough
...means of understanding and getting to a through conclusion about the characteristics of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71489361702 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85169888132 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497872340426 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 23.0359550562 252% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 215.065542335 60.3974514979 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.0 118.986275619 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.75 23.4991977007 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.21951772744 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300419332553 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174320061404 0.0831039109588 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623416503806 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17274310043 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605759680074 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 14.1392134831 213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.07 48.8420337079 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 12.1743820225 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.93 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 11.2143820225 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 11.7820224719 212% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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