To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Almost all major cities of a nation serve themselves as one or more important roles of a nation, so it can be said that with studying a nation’s major cities, we can understand a nation’s characteristics better.
We can find out that in most countries, their capitals are not only served for political purposes but also are regarded as economical indicators of a nation’s financial power. Take Taipei for example, the city of Taipei is not only a financial hub of Taiwan, but also is a political capital of Taiwan since the presidential hall and every important institute are located in Taipei. Financially speaking, huge companies have their headquarters set in Taipei, and the stock market is also traded in Taipei, thus we can sense the whole country’s financial status just by studying the city of Taipei.
Politically saying, both the president of Taiwan and the mayor of the city of Taipei are important politicians in Taiwan, and since the presidential hall is in Taipei, almost all parades and other political movement are held in Taipei, for instance, LGBT parade and other political campaigns are held in Taipei almost every month or every week, so by studying Taipei, we can know the country’s potential political moves. Further, take Tokyo for example, Tokyo is also both the political and financial center of Japan since it is considered the largest city around the globe and the Japanese royal family and prime minister are all work and live in Tokyo. Thus we can understand the economy and the politics of Japan by studying the city of Tokyo.
However, some might contend that major cities are often too modernized, or what they say, westernized, so the traditional culture might lose in those major cities. It might sound plausible, nonetheless, culture is well regarded as an important characteristic of a nation, so the government will do whatever they can do to preserve the culture inside the major cities. Take Taipei for example again, we can still see multitudes of historical structures inside the city form the Dutch era to the Japanese colonization period, so it is obvious that culture can be preserved inside a major city.
All in all, every major city inside a country plays one or multiple important roles of a country, even it is a politics center or a financial capital, or even it can present the history of a country. So I agree with the statement saying that by studying a country’s major cities, we can know different aspects of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...tical purposes but also are regarded as economical indicators of a nation’s financial powe...
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Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...inister are all work and live in Tokyo. Thus we can understand the economy and the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92399049881 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78620606556 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437054631829 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4142584135 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.75 118.986275619 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0833333333 23.4991977007 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202550065159 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921620614986 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589211938739 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1344042317 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581588998459 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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