Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
University is an important part of every students life, students will learn skills that they will carry with them for the rest of their lives. Hence, it is important for every student to be compentent in the specific field they select, and it is imperative for universities to make sure every student has and opportunity to be successful in their specific fields after graduation. Therefore, universities must create syllabus' for courses that create specialization in the desired field, and it is necessary that students are given all the knowledge they can in the specific field so they can get the best education, especially, if the student has pre-selected the field they want to specialize in.
In a capitalist, society to gain an edge over other labour the labourer must specialize in a skill. University is one of these avenue through which workforce labour is created. Hence, if the university fails to help do this through its courses, and offers various different courses it will make a degree less effective. Since, some of the time that should have been spend on the learning of a specific skill is now deviated to other subject. Which the student will not make use of once they graduate. A university degree should never deviate from its core subject of the field if more subjects and topics can be covered regarding the degree specialization it should be covered. A student can learn about other subjects out of the degree on their own time.
Secondly, If a student pre-selects a major he or she, wants to learn as much they can about that subject, so it does not make sense to have other subjects costing students the ability to learn skills in their desired major. Students selected the degree major to gain as much knowledge as possible. They paid tuition to learn as much as they can about a skill and if the university give them variety of different course the students are not getting their money's worth.
To reiterate, the job of the university to make sure it provides students with the desired education in the degree major. When the university deviates from this it is costly to the students future as they have less knowledge attained in the subject field making specialization of labour difficult. In addition, have variety of subject is unfair for students since they paid money to learn about a specific skill but are now forced to learn about a skill that they perhaps are not interested in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...niversity is an important part of every students life, students will learn skills that t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this avenue' or 'these avenues'?
Suggestion: this avenue; these avenues
...ialize in a skill. University is one of these avenue through which workforce labour is creat...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s it will make a degree less effective. Since, some of the time that should have bee...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ll make a degree less effective. Since, some of the time that should have been spend on th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive. Since, some of the time that should have been spend on the learning of a spe...
^^
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...some of the time that should have been spend on the learning of a specific skill is ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 496, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat they perhaps are not interested in.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85336538462 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64029317836 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.413461538462 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9079109898 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1875 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203099176867 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863705830744 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048231223688 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142657902238 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453611675636 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.