Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying
It is the responsibility of an education institution to develop a curricilum that caters to the diverse interests of the students and also support their holistic development. It should not restrict the students from taking courses outside their fields of interest. Students during their freshman year might not be fully aware of where there interests lie. During their senior years students become mature enough to decide where their interests lie and what courses should be taken to support their career. Hence in mandating this policy, universities may be forcing students to define their interests when they may not be knowing that. Hence I do not completely concur with the policy that universities should control how the students take courses. In today education system, a lot of fields are inter-disciplinary. Students studying majoring in one field might require some basic knowledge in other fields for applications. For example , artificial intelligence may require the knowlege of computer science, mathematics and behavioral science too. Hence if a university prescribes a limited number of courses for students majoring in artificial intelligence, it may become difficult for a student to study courses that may be relevant for her study, but not available for selection. Universities may not be able to analyses in what direction a student develops his career and study, nor does a university have the right to restrict that. A student should be free to develop his course of study under guidance from professors and experienced scholars. It would imprudent to restrict the number of courses. Since what constitutes an interest is very difficult to define in a list of courses. Schools are seats of elementary education, when students are young and need knowledge of a lot of subjects for their development. Universities are institutions of higher education in a state. It is wise on their part to let the students be free to choose what they want to study, provide them with counselling to help them decide and let them explore where there interests lie. In mandating this policy the universities would rather be taking a toll on themselves. They would have to decide what can be the various fields of study, which is in itself a seemingly unsurmountable task. Further they would have to delegate the responsibilty of developing a couses list to various departments. It is incumbent on the departments to develop a course list taht caters to the students and does not circumscibe their horizon of study. I believe that implementing this policy is not a wothwhile option for the students as well as the universities. There should definitely be some discipline, where the advisors can require their scholars to take a compulsory list of courses . But studenst should be left with certain credits to allocate to courses that they want to study, irrespective of what their interests are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, while, for example, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2426.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16170212766 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99461776601 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434042553191 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1707293934 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340460377144 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108851709422 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750565047096 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340460377144 0.150359130593 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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