Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
Having a clear path to your goal creates diligence and focus leading to excellent results. Students should be required to take the relevant courses needed for their field of study.
Focus and diligence are keys to success. By universities placing a limit on the courses taken with respect to their respective fields, students can thus be more focused on just what is required to excel in their field of study without distractions from other courses that would add little or no value to their careers. Imagine an engineering students who hasn't fully comprehended engineering mathematics courses having to deal with art classes, and at the end of the day, would only be thinking about his failing grades. Focus and diligence creates a clear path for success leading to a better future for the students.
Time is highly precious in a students life and vastly needed. Taking less courses creates valuable time for students which if managed can lead to academic excellence. A student taking only relevant courses can be able to use his or her spare time to comprehend what was already thought or take a good rest and a hectic day. Spare time with great management can turn a C student to an A student.
Though it is true that more courses yield creativity with respect to the students and also creates an opportunity to explore something different from the norm which can be refreshing. Like having a music class after a day of chemical experiments.
Streamlining a students course work would lead a better academic performance for the students.
- The perceived greatness of any political leader has more to do with the challengesfaced by the leader than with any of his or her inherent skills and abilities 50
- Progress should be the aim of any great society. People too often cling unnecessarily to obsolete ways of thinking and acting because of both a high comfort level and a fear of the unknown. 50
- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Mi 33
- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...dents. Time is highly precious in a students life and vastly needed. Taking less cou...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun courses is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...students life and vastly needed. Taking less courses creates valuable time for stude...
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...reates valuable time for students which if managed can lead to academic excellence...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'A' is left.
Suggestion: an; A
...reat management can turn a C student to an A student. Though it is true that mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, it is true, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 261.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95019157088 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6708141438 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547892720307 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3053818564 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233811880034 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879705350195 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862029176381 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136572268275 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580554903744 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.