SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
The author states that Supercorp's decision to relocate to Corporateville was the best decision base on some assumptions stated. This is higly flawed because the creadibility of the arguments is based on vague assumptions, lack of statistics and unvalidated facts.
The writer states that Corporateville is a superior place to live in due to the flux of homeowners. This statement definately is fictitious. Saying that Corporateville is a superior place could mean anything. It could the that an army base is situated there and thus the statement is attributed to military might and security or that its GDP is more than that of SuperCorp. This will can't stipulate because of lack of information provided.
Thereafter, the author states that it workers prefer non-urban areas based on a survey by one employee. This statement has flaws all over it. To base the entire workers preference on one survey an employee creates no credibility. The survey might have been just of employees of a certain department who are not used to the urban lifestyle. The survey could also have of a sample of 100 employees out of about a 1000, thus not largely inclusive and rendering the argument flawed.
Also the taxes of the two towns as used by the writer as an argument has to be validated before authenticating its credibility. It might be that the taxes are cheaper in Corporateville but its wages are really low and thus might even make it standard of living worse than the other.
- Progress should be the aim of any great society. People too often cling unnecessarily to obsolete ways of thinking and acting because of both a high comfort level and a fear of the unknown. 50
- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Mi 33
- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying. 50
- The perceived greatness of any political leader has more to do with the challengesfaced by the leader than with any of his or her inherent skills and abilities 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... more than that of SuperCorp. This will cant stipulate because of lack of informatio...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...s flaws all over it. To base the entire workers preference on one survey an employee cr...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... and rendering the argument flawed. Also the taxes of the two towns as used by t...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 2260.96107784 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 249.0 441.139720559 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93574297189 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9608227756 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 204.123752495 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526104417671 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 705.55239521 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8116855956 57.8364921388 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7857142857 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 23.324526521 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.70786347227 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142119715967 0.218282227539 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051909848934 0.0743258471296 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642723588574 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923184225004 0.128457276422 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652484592105 0.0628817314937 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.3799401198 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 98.500998004 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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