The line graph indicates the trends of three criminal cases in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012. The three criminal cases are burglary, car theft, and robbery which means it is a theft from the person.
In 2003, the burglary cases in 2003 was approximately 3500 incidents while the number of car theft and robbery were 2800 and 600 respectively. In 2004, the number of burglary increased dramatically and reached the peak at 3700. By the year 2008, the burglary cases dropped significantly to 1100. It was arouse slightly to 1300 in the year 2012 with a slight fluctuation. As for the car theft, it remained fairly constant in 2005 before a gradual decline to above 2000 in 2006. In the year 2012, it was rose back to the original figure at 2800 with fluctuation in the 6-year periods. On the other hand, the robbery showed a slight rise in 2005 in which the figure is approximately 900. By the year 2008, it experienced a significant drop to touch the point 500. After that, in 2012, it rose back to the original figure at 600.
Overall, it can be concluded that the number of burglary incidents showed a declining trend while the number of car theft and robbery incidents showed a fairly constant trend with some fluctuations in between 2003 and 2012.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'aroused'.
Suggestion: aroused
...s dropped significantly to 1100. It was arouse slightly to 1300 in the year 2012 with ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'while', 'as for', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210526315789 0.268076937826 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.0971659919028 0.116061578633 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0647773279352 0.0759168565197 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0445344129555 0.0366838410393 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0283400809717 0.0131127313244 216% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14979757085 0.155750635184 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0121457489879 0.0379272487307 32% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.58104375881 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0283400809717 0.0210936926555 134% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.12955465587 0.0948980150116 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00404858299595 0.00437022459523 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0080971659919 0.00967000014798 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1268.0 1161.00487805 109% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.9 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68609865471 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286995515695 0.337110787985 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.192825112108 0.247514529752 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143497757848 0.171178102325 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0807174887892 0.112407865282 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58104375881 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479820627803 0.546246751206 88% => OK
Word variations: 42.4607331387 49.3433353143 86% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5833333333 23.0094962315 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2817106508 42.9750493124 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 135.714022679 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 23.0094962315 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.416666666667 0.689975730869 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 37.8658445441 47.7609492067 79% => OK
Elegance: 2.19047619048 2.94281807926 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435885740076 0.418131533498 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.165659771533 0.181151798455 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0769361471773 0.0850326197045 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.637612793954 0.706616315825 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145713681369 0.157042692854 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234113192297 0.228904883108 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581012299455 0.108899403657 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.424629980795 0.367819155151 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0353162186196 0.0812612215331 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327134492235 0.316326947829 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678454185386 0.0921553760075 74% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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