The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The charts show data on the ages of the residents of Yemen and Italy and future situation project for 2050. Overall, it can be clearly seen that people of 0-14 years age are majority of Yemen’s population in 2000 and for 2050 this amount will decrease, whilst Italy’s majority residents consist of people who 15-59 years, however the percentage of this point will get down.
Compared the population of two countries Yemen and Italy we can notice that in Yemen people who 0-14 years are the main part of country which composed from 50.1%, while in Italy this percentage drastically differ and it consists of 14.1%. The vast part of Italian population 15-59 aged people and it is 61.6%. Though in projection of 2050 the percentage will down to 46.2%, this index of vast part population remains on the first place, whereas compared by 2000 year people who 60+ years will rise from 24.1% to 42.3% in projection of 2050.
Although people 15-59 aged in Yemen in 2000 composed from 46.3%, the index will increase to 57.3% in 2050.
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consist of people who 15-59 years
consist of people who are 15-59 years
people who 0-14 years are the main part of country
people who in 0-14 years are the main part of country
this percentage drastically differ
this percentage drastically differs
the percentage will down to 46.2%
the percentage will be down to 46.2%
who 60+ years will rise
who in 60+ years will rise
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