The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.
The data of the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies are presented in line chart almost one century from 1920 to 2000. Overall, it can be observed that FedEx had fluctuative trend data. Nevertheless, TNT had upward trend data.
First of all, the number of parcels transfered by FedEx initially stood at 15000 in 1920 and it increased dramatically well under 25000 in the next two decades . However, this number went down sharply at 12500 in 1950 and it remained stable until 1960 followed by level off improvement in the following four decades.
On the other hand, the parcels sent by TNT had less- modest improvement number for the first two decades. It rose up slightly just under 10000 in 1940 and there was no change until 1950. After grew modestly to just over 10000 in 1960, it slipped back around 10000 which is stable by last two decades before rocketing to the 25000 in the end of period.
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The data of the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies are presented in line chart almost one century from 1920 to 2000.
The data of the parcels delivered by two major mail service companies are presented in the line chart from 1920 to 2000.
The number of the parcels delivered by two major mail service companies are presented in the line chart in almost one century from 1920 to 2000.
Sentence: After grew modestly to just over 10000 in 1960, it slipped back around 10000 which is stable by last two decades before rocketing to the 25000 in the end of period.
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Suggestion: Refer to After and grew
Sentence: Overall, it can be observed that FedEx had fluctuative trend data.
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Sentence: First of all, the number of parcels transfered by FedEx initially stood at 15000 in 1920 and it increased dramatically well under 25000 in the next two decades .
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