expenditure and consumption of fast foods
The first chart provides agglomeration of expenditure for fast food based on per-capita income and the second graph illustrates fast food consumption quantity from 1970 to 1990 in grams.
Superior and average income classes much spent their money to buy hamburgers and It was more two times higher than pizza, fish and chips. One superior person spent more than 40 pennies and another 33 pennies. In other hand, majority people from low income group chose fish and chips, nearly 20 pence in a week and they just expended 8 pennies for pizza, a half lower than high income group.
The quantity of Pizza and hamburger had grown in two decades. A consumption of hamburgers was a highest trend since 1985 until 1990 with average 200-300 grams. Contrary with fish and chips, took place in top position in 1970 but decreased a third times in 1985. interestingly, in the 1980s amount of consumption hamburgers-fish and chips were same and several years later happened between pizza-fish and chips.
We can analyze from the datum that hamburgers was the junk food most preferred major people while in 1970 hamburgers did not too much produced. However pizza, fish and chips always stayed in second and third place alternately.
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Superior and average income classes much spent their money
Superior and average income classes spent much of their money
It was more two times higher than pizza,
It was two times higher than pizza,
A consumption of hamburgers was a highest trend
A consumption of hamburgers was the highest trend
Contrary with fish and chips, took place in top position in 1970 but decreased a third times in 1985.
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Sentence: In other hand, majority people from low income group chose fish and chips, nearly 20 pence in a week and they just expended 8 pennies for pizza, a half lower than high income group.
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