The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the number of fish and meat consumption from 1979 to 2014 in a european country. In this survey, there are 4 kinds of fish and meat as samples; chicken, beef, lamb and fish.
Chicken and beef were two kinds of meat that the consumers more prefered to eat than lamb and fish. It took 150-250 grams per person per week of consumption between 1979 and 2004. These two kinds of meat had differently fluctuation of consumption.Year by year, the number of chicken that had been consumed, rose steadly but beef had significant decrease. Chicken reached the peak in 2004 at 250 grams of consumption. Whereas beef had through the bottom at 100 grams of consumption per person per week in 2004.
Between 1979 and 2004, lamb and fish had under 150 grams of consumption per week. Lamb decreased slightly from 150 to 60 (grams) and fish had no significant fluctuate. It were steadly amount 60,50,40 grams of consumptions per week.
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in a european country
in an European country
the consumers more prefered to eat
the consumers are more preferred to eat
had differently fluctuation
had different fluctuation
Whereas beef had through
Whereas beef had been through
had no significant fluctuate
had no significant fluctuation
It were steadly amount 60,50,40 grams
It were steady to the amount 60,50,40 grams
Sentence: Chicken and beef were two kinds of meat that the consumers more prefered to eat than lamb and fish.
Error: prefered Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: These two kinds of meat had differently fluctuation of consumption.Year by year, the number of chicken that had been consumed, rose steadly but beef had significant decrease.
Error: steadly Suggestion: steady
Sentence: It were steadly amount 60,50,40 grams of consumptions per week.
Error: steadly Suggestion: steady
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