The three pie chart below the changes in annual spending by particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
This is three pie chart give information of total spending of school of particular of UK with changes in annual spending in 1981, 1991 and 2001
The first pie chart was showed about information of precentage of total school spending 1981 in UK school, other workers' salaries 28%, insurance 2%, resources e.g. books 15% furniture and equipment 15%, and teacher salaries 40% and raising experience of percentage of total school in 1991, that can showed of second pie chart was display information of amount percentage of insurance 3% , teacher salaries 50%, resources e.g.books 20% but furniture and equipment 5% and other workers' salaries 22%. experience reduce annual spending of 1981 to 1991. In the third of pie chart showed information other worker salaries 15%, resources e.g. books 9% and teacher salaries 45%. the percentage of total school spending decrease, but furniture and equipment and insurance revert to increase namely 23% and 5% than in 1981 and 1991.
Overall, from three pie chart, the value of percentage of total school spending of furniture and equipment and insurance higher than total other spending.
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the value of percentage of total school spending of furniture and equipment and insurance higher than total other spending.
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Sentence: The first pie chart was showed about information of precentage of total school spending 1981 in UK school, other workers' salaries 28, insurance 2,
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