Annual average spending on clothes per person in the US in 1985 1995 and 2005

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Annual average spending on clothes per person in the US in 1985, 1995, and 2005

The given bar chart illustrates the rate of yearly expenditure on clothes each person on an average in the US in three years 1985, 1995, and 2005
Overall,it is clear that women spent the most on clothes. The average spending on clothes by women dramatically increased increased " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">whereas the expenditure on others clothes clothes " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">witnessed a slight dramatic " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">rose
In the first year, it can be seen that the expenditure on boys' and girls' clothes started at the lowest point at around 140 dollars dollars " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">individual while the clothing expenses on male's clothes in this country was 300 dollars each person. The average spending on female's clothes was was " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">approximately 450 dollars per person and stood at the the highest point. In 1995, there were slightly increased on boys' and girls' clothes expenditure, at 150 and 160 dollars each person respectively compared to 470 dollars dollars " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">individual on female's expenditure. At the same time, the spending on male's clothes saw a dramatic rose of 300 to over 400 dollars each person on an average.
In 2005, the figure for female's clothes experienced a drastic growth, at 650 dollars dollars " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">individuals and stood at the highest point during this time frame. The average spending on clothes for males was was " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">much lower than the figure fo females, at about 400 dollars each person on an average. By contrast, there was a slightly climbed on girl's clothes expenditure, at 180 dollars dollars " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">individual and the spending on boys' clothes remained during this time frame.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...hree years 1985, 1995, and 2005 Overall,it is clear that women spent the most on c...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: increased
...ending on clothes by women dramatically increased increased ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: clothes
...apos;>whereas the expenditure on others clothes clothes ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: dollars
...arted at the lowest point at around 140 dollars dollars ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is country was 300 dollars each person. The average spending on females clothes was...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: was
...The average spending on females clothes was was ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...average spending on females clothes was was ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ely 450 dollars per person and stood at the the highest point. In 1995, there were slig...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ely 450 dollars per person and stood at the the highest point. In 1995, there were slig...
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Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: dollars
...ach person respectively compared to 470 dollars dollars ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 3, column 795, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'females'' or 'female's'?
Suggestion: females'; female's
...te-space: pre-wrap;'>individual on females expenditure. At the same time, the spen...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: dollars
...es experienced a drastic growth, at 650 dollars dollars ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: was
...e average spending on clothes for males was was ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...erage spending on clothes for males was was ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 4, column 550, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: dollars
...ed on girls clothes expenditure, at 180 dollars dollars ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 965.302439024 204% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 324.0 196.424390244 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08950617284 4.92477711251 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.65064673881 2.65546596893 175% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.373456790123 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 283.868780488 184% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.328565418 43.030603864 417% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.625 112.824112599 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.5 22.9334400587 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152966881387 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118758906248 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070451806394 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157619443019 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109844654952 0.0819641961636 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 13.2329268293 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.93 11.4140731707 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.4329268293 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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