Annual average spending on clothes per person in the US in 1985 1995 2005

Essay topics:

Annual average spending on clothes per person in the US in 1985, 1995, 2005

The given bar chart illustrates the rate of yearly expenditure on clothes each person on an average in the US in three years 1985, 1995, and 2005
Overall,it is clear that women spent the most on clothes. The average spending on clothes by women dramatically increased whereas the expenditure on others clothes witnessed a slight rose
In the first year, it can be seen that the expenditure on boys' and girls' clothes started at the lowest point at around 140 dollars individual while the clothing expenses on male's clothes in this country was 300 dollars each person. The average spending on female's clothes was approximately 450 dollars per person and stood at the the highest point. In 1995, there were slightly increased on boys' and girls' clothes expenditure, at 150 and 160 dollars each person respectively compared to 470 dollars individual on female's expenditure. At the same time, the spending on male's clothes saw a dramatic rose of 300 to over 400 dollars each person on an average.
In 2005, the figure for female's clothes experienced a drastic growth, at 650 dollars individuals and stood at the highest point during this time frame. The average spending on clothes for males was much lower than the figure fo females, at about 400 dollars each person on an average. By contrast, there was a slightly climbed on girl's clothes expenditure, at 180 dollars individual and the spending on boys' clothes remained during this time frame.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...hree years 1985, 1995, and 2005 Overall,it is clear that women spent the most on c...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is country was 300 dollars each person. The average spending on females clothes was...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ely 450 dollars per person and stood at the the highest point. In 1995, there were slig...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ely 450 dollars per person and stood at the the highest point. In 1995, there were slig...
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Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'females'' or 'female's'?
Suggestion: females'; female's
...y compared to 470 dollars individual on females expenditure. At the same time, the spen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94650205761 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63211755283 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460905349794 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7670340123 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.25 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317617578841 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168554376387 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720926355986 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220149639999 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07380867893 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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