Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Thanks to the modernization and progression of our world these days, it is no longer a rarity for humans to get easy access to technology such as office work at home and online learning. This achievement has both benefits and drawbacks, but if weigh up its pros and cons, I strongly believe that the first outweighs the latter.
On the one hand, the development of such high technology may be the culprit of the distant attitude of some individuals. It is undeniable that working and studying from home means that hardly do we need to go out just because with a laptop or a smartphone, we can get through to our partners to have a meeting or an online lesson. Lacking interaction and face-to-face conversations certainly become an inevitable consequence. Also, this is the ultimate answer to the afore-mentioned issue of more and more callous people outside the society.
On the other hand, the advancement of technology is the clearest testament to the globalized development of the entire world. Not only does it provide workers and learners with a great deal of reliable and valuable information sources, but it is also of use when updating people with the latest trends and informative notions, especially in such nerve-racking social lockdown due to Covid-19 nowadays. What's more, this hi-tech revolution is deemed to be the major inspiration and motivation for novel inventions and a more creative ritual world to progress, which are dominant catalysts for further success and triumph in the economic sectors in many countries. For example, in many developed nations, like the USA or France, with the help of modern technology, it is obvious that their productivity always remains high and stable without requiring too much labor force or time loss.
In conclusion, I hold a firm belief that modern technology is of paramount importance, playing an indispensable role in our daily life. Although it still causes humans certain problems, this is undoubtedly a positive development more than a negative one.
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- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 89
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 78
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 89
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11178247734 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9880941054 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628398791541 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6834138028 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269812977299 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810929314102 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570977066629 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142677712124 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353672569366 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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