Automatic Photo Booth

Essay topics:

Automatic Photo Booth

This picture elucidates how to produce a photo by using machine which is known as automatic photo booth. This machine gives several instructions whether inside or outside in order to make clients can use appropriately.

In the initial stages of process, the customers need to put some coins into the input coinage. Thereafter, the candidates are provided 2 options of picture format to print the photo out, such as a large format or 4 passport-sized photos. Besides that, the opportunity for choosing colored or black and white photos, but is obliged to be colored for a passport. Ultimately, the photo will be delivered within a minute.

Cut to inside the photo cabinet that has some facilities. In the center ground, before taking a photo the customers are able to fit their position by using adjustable stool and don’t forget to close the curtain during the process. On the top of fronted wall there is a mirror that services the clients to check whether they ready or not, and slightly below on the eye level there is a lens. Subsequently, on the top left there is a lamp, once you push the rope you will see a light single flash after 3 seconds.

Votes
Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, second, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73762376238 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64442174697 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.909212942 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242114358251 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888286597463 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138347587779 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151805821519 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979332930244 0.0819641961636 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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