The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007

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The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007

The rail transport in the UK, the USA, Japan and Italy in 2007 is depicted in the chart. Overall, it can be seen that Japan has the highest passengers and the heaviest cargo carried. However, the lowest passengers and cargo carried is the USA.

To begin with, in 2007, the UK and Italy possessed nearly similar number of people using the train. In Britain was 5.9 passengers while Italy was 5.5. Then, the number passengers of Japan were twenty-seven which was much higher compared to the USA that only 0.3. Moreover, the distance of passengers per head of population between the UK and Italy were slightly different. The rail transport in Italy was approximately 10 kilometers longer than the UK.

In addition, the weights of cargo carried by Britain, Japan and Italy in 2007 were almost equal. The heaviest cargo was Japan at 23.01 billion tons, and then followed by the UK 22.2 billion and Italy 21.9 billion in the last. However, the weight of cargo carried from these three states was extremely far in comparison with the USA that only 2,880 billion tons.

Votes
Average: 8.3 (9 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, while, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8097826087 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39790960279 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527173913043 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0141226035 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0664742437721 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445745521581 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062945806983 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551848355616 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301846939404 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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