In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack of support because of their parent’s absence.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Recently days, the hustling to meet our needs increase significantly. Many families argue that both of parents must have a job in order to add their income because day by day the level of people needs gradually increase. Menwhile, the argument that the other think is “their absence in growing up their children causes their children feel they are unsupported”. Suposrters’ and dectrators’ thought will be elaborated in this essay.
To begin with, most families that have deficiency in their income claim to support their necessity by both of parents have to work. If only husband that earns money, it cannot cover their expenditure but It will be different if both of parents working. For instance, more money that families earn more convenience they will get, parents are able to afford their children have high quality of education, moreover they can continue their study to a university, and children can join an array of course for enhancing their soft skills like foreign language and programming.
On the other side, those who believe parents’ presence is a vital to nurture their children especially for their spritual progress. At least one of parents must stay at home to take care specifically mother whom has maternal instinct, while husband have to work. If both of parents work their children will be lonely and they will feel lack of affection and forgotten, thus will lead several problems. For example, most people that neglect to bring up their children make their children will not care about their parents. For this reason, parents have to discuss to solve and share their resposibilty for bringing up their children.
As arguments explain above, those issues rely on how parents overcome their finance and nurturing and how parents balance those problems. However, all of the problems will be solved if parents perfectly manage it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'discuss solving'.
Suggestion: discuss solving
...rents. For this reason, parents have to discuss to solve and share their resposibilty for bringi...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...arents balance those problems. However, all of the problems will be solved if parents perf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13770491803 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60330759368 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4802539298 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33363849506 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12504003461 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709461342557 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209881604264 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616008108331 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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