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The bar chart illustrates the data on the age group in Iceland from 1990 to 2020. Overall, the 25-54 aged group has the most significant number and increased dramatically, while almost the remaining ancient group had a decreased trend.
In the last decade of 19 century, the 25-54 age group reached more than 30% and became higher than any group. This figure continued to have an upward trend to 2020 with nearly half of the population in Iceland. Over 10% was for more than 65 years old age group, the proportion of those aged 65 and over fluctuated in each decade and stayed at 15% in 2020.
The opposite trend can be seen in people aged 55 to 64, this group went down from 14% in 1990 to 10% in 2020. The 15 - 24 age group dropped rapidly by more than half to nearly only 8% after 30 years. The youngest group stayed at the second highest with 1 in 4 percent. However, in 2020 it plummeted sharply to 18% but still remain at that level.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age group in Iceland from 1990 to 2020. Overall, the 25-54 aged group has the mo...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g ancient group had a decreased trend. In the last decade of 19 century, the 25...
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Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...sed trend. In the last decade of 19 century, the 25-54 age group reached more than ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...each decade and stayed at 15% in 2020. The opposite trend can be seen in people...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... half to nearly only 8% after 30 years. The youngest group stayed at the second hig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, still, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36931818182 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24127932533 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6798273027 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0556432848939 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372417492587 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105335573776 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566842217911 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801635952296 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age group in Iceland from 1990 to 2020. Overall, the 25-54 aged group has the mo...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g ancient group had a decreased trend. In the last decade of 19 century, the 25...
^^^
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...sed trend. In the last decade of 19 century, the 25-54 age group reached more than ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...each decade and stayed at 15% in 2020. The opposite trend can be seen in people...
^^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... half to nearly only 8% after 30 years. The youngest group stayed at the second hig...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, still, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36931818182 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24127932533 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6798273027 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0556432848939 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372417492587 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105335573776 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566842217911 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801635952296 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.