The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar chart illustrates the rate of individuals who reside in city zones which is marked as percentage in 5 different continents and also a world category. The given percentages in each category get divided into 3 bars in three years including 1950, 2007 and 2030.
Overall, a transparent upward trend is seen in each category as the time goes on. In addition, in all 3 spans Africa allocated the lowest number of residences in urban cities. Alternatively, North America always has and will be allocating the most populated territory in terms of urban residence.
In 1950, population density in world was 29% that the highest share was for North America with 64%. Additionally, the lowest and second-lowest share were for Africa and Asia by having 15% and 17%, respectively. The decrease rate from 29% to 49% in world category is shown in 2007. Although all trends were upward ones in all groups, The Latin America. Caribbean had the most drastic rise turning 767 from 42%. However, North America had a slight rise having a 15% growth.
The anticipation for 2030 is showing that an upward trend is going to be continued and 60% of total share will live in urban sides universally. Accordingly, Africa and Asia will relatively have same share which both allocate around 50% of share and they will be lower than average percentage of world which will be 60%. The three highest density spots will still remain as how they used to be. The numbers show a moderate jump which will be 78% in Europe, 84% In Latin America Caribbean and 87 percent in North America.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, second, so, still, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82656826568 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63335780535 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560885608856 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7988205889 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920833367924 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319477848328 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419275786323 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678801485015 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502425124166 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The provided bar chart illustrates the r...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...years including 1950, 2007 and 2030. Overall, a transparent upward trend is s...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rritory in terms of urban residence. In 1950, population density in world was...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d a slight rise having a 15% growth. The anticipation for 2030 is showing tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, second, so, still, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82656826568 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63335780535 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560885608856 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7988205889 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920833367924 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319477848328 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419275786323 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678801485015 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502425124166 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.