The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Country B’s economy in 1995 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025.
The bar chart depicts data about the percentage change in several employment sectors of Country B’s economy between 2005 and 2015 and makes forecasts for 2025. It is clear that more people will be employed in finance sector and its share shows continued growth, whereas the opposite is true for manufacturing and tourism. The remaining areas, regarding food processing and oil, coal and gas, will see no changes until the end of the period, although they both witnessed sharp growth in 2015.
With reference to finance industry, its figure is predicted to reach a peak of more than 40% in 2015, after starting at around 32% in 2005, making it the largest share among the total number. In stark comparison, the proportions of manufacturing and tourism prospects will continue to decline during the period shown, from just over 22% to nearly 5% and from a forth to a fifth, respectively.
Interestingly, food processing and fossil fuels match the same trend. Starting at a tenth in 2005, the data of the former rose to reach the highest of 20% in 2015, before falling back to 10% at the end of the period. Likewise, the rate of fossil fuels will have increased to a projected rate of 25% by 2025, falling from over a third 10 years prior.
- The bar chart below illustrates five different industries percentage share of Country B s economy in 1995 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025 89
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
- Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socializing online to meeting one another in person Why do you think this is the case What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person 84
- Task 2 Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crimes To what extent do you agree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, regarding, so, third, whereas, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76388888889 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5593729875 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0458194155 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.625 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165863689177 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699279771606 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104071845302 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10192651664 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805758341801 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.