The bar chart below shows about the average children born per woman in 5 countries in 1970 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart below shows about the average children born per woman in 5 countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart below represents how many children were born by per women in 5 gulf countries from 1970 to 2000.
Overall, it is obviously transparent that Oman is the country experiencing the highest amount of children born in both years. 5 nations tended to have the significant downward in 2000 rather than increase.
Firstly, as the aforemetioned information, Oman reached the peak in 199 by 7. In the same time in S. Arabia, the proportion of number of children ranked the second with the figure approximately at 7 of a woman. In 2000, Oman and S. Arabia saw the equivalent the rate of birth pointing out at 5.5 percent.
Secondly, 4 rest countries had a tendency to experience a fair fluctuation from mainly more than 2 to 4.1 percentage in 1990 as well as 2000. Quatar was the third rank in 1990 and 2000 respectively at 4.1 and 3.5%. The rate of UAE was at 4% in 1990 and with Bahrian and Kuwait is likely to soap rapidly in 2000 until less than 3%.
Finally, Bahrain and Kuwait experienced the same percentage at 2.5 in 1990

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54010695187 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.754431202 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1135362434 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.75 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183569243774 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630590273496 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829222794177 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108660888915 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10659512189 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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