The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve the crime. Do you agree or disagree?
The proportion of crimes has decreased dramatically in the fast-paced digital world, thanks to the use of cutting-edge technology. From my perspective, I completely agree with this remark.
Individually, it is on the card that citizens' dangers are gradually removed. Circumstances such as robbers entering into ordinary people's homes, holigan attacks, and so on are only once in a blue moon monitored by high-tech severe observation techniques to ensure the protection of each individual.
The content of the general public has a myriad of advantages of electric appliances. To begin with, technological advancements have shown that the jail's warning and prevention systems are extremely strict, with the goal of preventing the prisoners' covert and planned escape. For example, even if the inmates have a well-thought-out plot to flee, emerging technologies have the ability to detect and stop inmates from fleeing within the confines of the prison by preparing the power network to represent a hazard to the jailers.
Second, with the use of a surveillance network, cops may find the trace much more easily and promptly to clean up the delicacy. For example, gangs engage in illegal activities such as distributing prohibited drugs, narcotics, and other substances that are harmful to people's health and way of life in any country. They can be tracked down by police and search and rescue agencies.
To summarize, the existence and flourishing of technology provides a vast array of benefits for reducing the capabilities of criminals. I agree that improving the technology field is necessary in order to increase the security of the inhabitants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... each individual. The content of the general public has a myriad of advantages of electric ...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jails'' or 'jail's'?
Suggestion: jails'; jail's
...ogical advancements have shown that the jails warning and prevention systems are extr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, well, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13838612277 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6423944118 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115332841155 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355450608582 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391578305329 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553315420454 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408610834085 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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