The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in Towns A and
B in two years, 1960 and 2010.
The four pie charts compare the distribution of employment in three different sectors in town A and town B in 1960 and 2010.
Overall, town A saw the greatest increase in the percentage of people working in the manufacturing sector, which overtook the other sectors to employ most of the workers of the town. In town B, however, sales had the highest proportion of the workforce.
Looking at town A, we can see that in 1960, 40% of the employees in town A had a sales-related job, while the figures for manufacturing and services were lower, at 30% and 29%, respectively. In 2010, however, manufacturing surpassed the other two sectors to attract the highest proportion of workers (64%), whereas employment in sales and services saw a decline of 21% and 14%, respectively.
Turning to town B, sales attracted the majority of people, despite a drop from 70% in 1960 to 53% in 2010. Manufacturing and services, by contrast, saw rises in the proportion of employees of 15% and 2%, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87647058824 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07608815529 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0434577329 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32275637215 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148018786692 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119148552514 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215464051346 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103791250357 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.