The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting the reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart given depicts the proportion of Australians classified into six different age categories who were committed to physical activity on a regular basis in terms of both genders in 2010.
It is clear that about a half of Australians did regular exercise. With the exception of the young people, women were more engaged in physical activity than men.
To begin with, in the youngest group, the percentage for male reached its peak at 52.8% and the female’s was at a lower degree, 47.7%. When it came to the 25-34 age bracket, nevertheless, the figure showed a surprising downward trend in the number of men exercised while that for female climbed to 48.9%. In the 35-44 and 45-54 age groups, more female enrolled in physical activity and hit the peak at 53.3%, in comparison with a drop to the lowest point at only 39.5% of its counterpart before slipping back at 43.1%.
Turning to the two remaining groups, although more men did physical activity, women showed a downward trend with a slight decrease by 0.3%. Finally, the proportion for men and women at 65 and over, 46.7% and 47.1% respectively, were identical with the least gap at 0.4%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: Except; Except for
...lf of Australians did regular exercise. With the exception of the young people, women were more engag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, nevertheless, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85858585859 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61994188876 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3314184645 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233266965216 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106301154469 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577450960602 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157025896535 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530178287922 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.