The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in
different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The graph illustrates the proportion of people, who often took part in sport activities in six age groups, taken for both genders for a 2010 year alone.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is apparent that in all age groups, except the youngest one, the percentage of sportish women was higher, compared to same statistics for men. It is also noticeable that men and women demonstrated the reverse pattern of physical activity distribution in different age groups.
As for details, the highest proportion of women who did regular physical activities stood at 53.3 percente in the age group between 45 and 54, while the highest percentage for men was observed in the age group from 15 to 24, at 52.8. The percentage of sportish young women stood at 47.7 and demonstrated growth in the following age groups, gaining its peak at 45-54 and than reaching a plateau, followed by decline for the 65 and over years. Same statistics for men demostrated reverse pattern, reaching minimum at 35 to 44, at 39.5 percent, and finally becoming even with women’s percentage by the end of the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...e groups, gaining its peak at 45-54 and than reaching a plateau, followed by decline...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90810810811 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7372708252 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.677790267 43.030603864 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.6 112.824112599 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289499776391 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160183477726 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071095424932 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188959752948 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532574315854 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.