The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

The bar chart demonstrates the amounts of electricity produced and consumed by the top ten countries in 2014.
Overall, it is noticeable that the production and consumption of electricity in China was the highest while the opposite was true for Korea. Moreover, the amount of produced electricity was higher than that of used electricity.
In 2014, China was the country ranked first with the generated and consumed electricity among countries, just over 5300 billion kWh each. This was followed by the US, which was approximately one-fifth less than China, created 4099 billion kWh and used 3866 billion kWh. In addition, Russia was the only nation that produced and spent electricity accounted for just over 1000 billion kWh.
A similar pattern was experienced in most all countries, except for Germany. Germany was the only country that consumed electricity greater than the amount of electricity produced, at 582.5 and 526.6 billion kWh, respectively. Moreover, the lowest electricity creating and using with only just under 500 billion kWh each belonged to Korea.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, while, except for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3550295858 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81164105885 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4558491281 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.285714286 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22479220564 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140800175023 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130048992976 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196536277176 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143542521911 0.0819641961636 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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