the bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the top ten countries producing and consuming the electricity in 2014.
Generally speaking, there was a balance between the amount of electricity made and used in all countries.
To be specific, China and USA were represented as the two biggest producers and consumers with the amount of electricity born being 5398 billion kwh and 3866 billion one and the one of consumption being 5322 and 3866 respectively. The next group of countries showing the quite similarity was Russia and Japan with all figures from above 800 to 1000 billion kwh for both categories – production and consumption. being lower than them, the next 5 countries - India, Canada, France and Brazil, Germany ranked from 5th to 9th consecutively. Their produced and used electricity were no less than 500 billion kwh. Finally, the bottom in rank table was the place of Korea because its related numbers were below 500 billion kwh.
Interestingly, it was only Germany which made electricity more than their amount of consumption.
- the bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 80
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 78
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subject like Science and Technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Being
...ategories – production and consumption. being lower than them, the next 5 countries -...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20710059172 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84718035715 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621301775148 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3211910035 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157364238541 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781847345222 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999028761841 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121334018137 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125635300486 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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