The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart illustrates the generation and consumption of electricity in the ten countries in the year 2014.
Overall, it is clear that in all ten countries the electricity production approximated to the consumption. Additionally, China and the US showed the biggest figures on the chart.
Looking at the first five countries in more detail, the electricity which was produced in China and the US were by far highest at 5,398 billion kWh (bkWh) and 4,099 billion kWh (bkWh) respectively. In those nations the consumption of electricity ware also biggest at 5,322 bkWh and 3,866 bkWh respectively.In contrast, the electricity generation in Russia, Japan, India ranged from 1,057 bkWh to 871 bkWh and the consumption fell in the range of 1,038 bkWh to 698,8 bkWh.
Turning to five remaining countries, the electricity which was generated in those nations were higher than that of spending, except in Germany. In Germany, the production of electricity stood at 526,6 bkWh, while the consumption was at 582,5 bkWh. In addition, Korea Republic experienced a lowest point on the bar chart with 485,1 bkWh for production and 449,5 bkWh for consumpion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, so, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20430107527 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02756442959 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.807617601 43.030603864 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.333333333 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286475500131 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196916917778 0.103423049105 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140351568815 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256861097159 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14357146541 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.