The bar chart shows the average number of hours per week that men and women spend activities around the home

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The bar chart shows the average number of hours per week that men and women spend activities around the home.

The activities that adults spend in their home show in the bar chart and measure in hours per week.

Majority men prefer to surf the internet compared to women, with around 13 hours and 4 hours respectively. The average hours per week of watching television for males is more or less 14 hours, but the ones of the reverse groups are nearly the same as those men do internet surfing. At the same time, the men more tend to do gardening than women at 2 hours and 1 hour, and this latter one is the shortest time among all activities.

The number of females who spend their time in reading accounted for 6 hours and has slightly higher than males, with 5 hours. Women like to do washing up showing at 7 hours, but another group just spend for 5 hours. In addition, cleaning the house is the activity which women like to do, and they have the same amount of time as those males doing the laundry and reading, while men just spend more or less 3 hours. The popular activity on females is cooking and has the top rank in the average number of hours, they spend 15 hours, but for males just spend 9 hours.

Overall, females prefer to do household course while the reverse ones interest in doing pastime.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while, in addition, more or less

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41704035874 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17302402682 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520179372197 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9907395497 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371207067242 0.215688989381 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170243048204 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140441587855 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245222594835 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191821720226 0.0819641961636 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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