People believe that unemployed people should be made to work for their welfare/benefit payments. Others, however, see this as cheap labor.
Discuss the possible advantages and disadvantages of making unemployed people take any job. Do you believe that making unemployed people work is a good idea?
Giving a well-paid job to the idleness is a viable solution in order to fulfil their needs and to decrease the number of jobless, while others claim that it leads to inexpensive labour because it will affect the outcome of the companies.
The government should provide jobs to tackle unemployment’s problem so those people can get financial support to pay their cost of living such as housing. If the poor cannot solve the accommodation payment, they would be homelessness and poverty. Not only about the living cost, but also the number of jobless will decrease. Indonesian government in September 2018 accepted 6,000 new civil servants to diminish the poor and the redundancy around 50% and 30% respectively. This phenomenon also made such people complying daily needs. I believe this regulation can reduce the number of those people.
On the other hand, offering work to the cheap labours which do not have capability or skills will affect the output of the companies because they are forced by the stakeholder that is not suitable for those people. A statistic in Guangzhou, China claimed that one of the factories in China employed uneducated labour, so the quality of production decreased, within more than two fifth. That company did it in order to press the company’s expense.
On the whole, the government helps the unemployment to accomplish their basic needs through the job, but it gives a negative impact on the outcome of the factory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, such as, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09958506224 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85150106953 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626556016598 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3147392318 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.727272727 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162923501369 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556854367006 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571164670147 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810625484068 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519175385627 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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