The bar chart illustrated the quantity of emigration to Australia, Spain, New Zealand, USA and France from British in 4 years since 2004.
Overall Australia is the most favorite destination of British immigrant in the mentioned period of time. Meanwhile New Zealand and USA are the country which received least moved citizens.
In the first two years shown, the amount of immigrants to Australia, Spain and New Zealand was visually shown to be consistent. The number of immigrants to these countries is averaged relatively shown at 40, 34 and 23 thousands people. During the same time the number of residents which choose USA received a drop of about 4 thousands to above 19 thousands while this number of France almost doubled to 32 thousands people.
Last two years witnessed a small drop of 15 percent in the citizen moving wave to Australia, Spain and New Zealand. From 2006, the amount of immigrants moved to France was decreased to nearly a half at 2007, which accountable for 19 thousands people, a thousand lower than this number in USA at the same time.
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- In many workplaces online communication is now more common than face to face meetings Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 80
- Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land What solution is better 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...n of British immigrant in the mentioned period of time. Meanwhile New Zealand and USA are the ...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...igrant in the mentioned period of time. Meanwhile New Zealand and USA are the country whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9226519337 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65956544593 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0675059857 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0571962252058 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328056578892 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556920219901 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585571506118 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640427763468 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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