Some people think governments should care more about elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger people.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Education system for young generation is always one of the focused area in developing a country. In another aspect of society building, the elderly part of population is now growing and need to be take care of. In my opinion, the investment in teaching system for fresher generation should be balanced with the support for aged population.
There are numerous benefits of investing in education for younger part of population, they are the reasons why should it be maintained and focused in a country revolution. Firstly, by funding in education projects, especially science and technology, the governments also put in a major support for current scientists and researchers. For example, nowadays, universities and colleagues professors is also scientists, by funding in their teaching projects, many scientific development field received massive support, concurrently. Secondly, young generation will soon to be the main labor force of the every country, therefore, investing in them promote a healthy leverage to enhance the quality of future working population. Last but not least, with knowledgable fresher population as main work force, this part of society will asset more property and they will be able to support elder generation with finance and even sentimental values.
In another side of the big picture, the care provided to elderly should be maintained balanced by the government. Nowadays, many professors in the elder part of society still working, guiding and teaching the younger generation, so by providing care for the elderly, the support for in education for fresher generation can be provided mediately. In term of morality, the old people are the main labor force, who also contributed in the development of economy and also raising the newer generation, they should be respected. From a society viewpoint, providing elder part of the generation the care and the support, it will make an example to later generation, it will create a trust that their future will be assured, keep encouraging them to learn, develop and contribute to the country, the society.
In conclusion, the governments shouldn't overlook on the support for elderly part of population meanwhile the investment in education for younger generation should always be in the focused view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 8.3376753507 360% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3704735376 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96883406121 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465181058496 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9599839872 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.307692308 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221448943116 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989215116447 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713705233208 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177023460051 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526157297777 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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