In some countries, fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their products. do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In a modernizing world, since urban citizen usually have the furious pace of working and studying, the food and beverage industry which serving their needs is also an extremely fast-moving field. Nowadays, the food distributor are teaming up with schools in promoting their convenient meals. In my point of view, this may provide advantageous steps in student meals preparing, but it is potentially harmful to students welfare.
As far as time-saving concerned, supermarket and fast food advertisement enlarge the knowledge of end consumer about their meal supply catalogs, consequently, customers knows where to buy ready-to-eat food to save their time and money. Because food chain courses and prepared meals are relatively affordable and delicious, it is quite suitable in a tight budget and narrowed school time. this may be beneficial for institutes since their students can save time for class and resting . For instance, students can order their on-campus meals in a large menu to choose for their burdened finals or examine days.
however, in a wellness perspective, overused the leverage of promotions on fast food or prepared meals may cause students rely on fast food too much. Due to the unbalanced nutritious index of fast food and the preservation chemical substances in prepared meals, the consumers of these kinds of food sometime might put their health in potential danger. For example, the fried food which is usually found in the fast food chain is rich of salts and fats can put the consumers in digestive malfunctioning and obesity.
The teamed up advertising campaigns of schools and food suppliers may cause positive impact on students and their academic perfomance, however, the side effects of it may be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, look, may, so, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29856115108 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87700000337 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1878914123 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22785552147 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944576632715 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425036865718 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141066674657 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021099723412 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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