The bar chart shows the divorce rate into European countries from 2011 to 2015
The designed bar histogram beneath proclaims the enlightenment of divorce rates <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">in Finland and Sweden</span> for a period of 5 years .
It is perceptible from the stated bar chart that in the year 2011 the rate of divorce in Finland is nearly 38% whereas in Sweden that is about 44%. In the next year, divorce rate went up rapidly in Sweden and reached near to 50 percent. Owning to this, peer country steady decline is observed almost of 4%.
However,in the year 2013 a slightly reduction in divorce rate is evident in Sweden that is about 2 percent. Moreover, its vice versa in Finland that year and judicial separate figures that is close to 40 percent.This is followed in 2104 where divorce rate in Finland crosses mark of 40% and in Sweden it is decreases to almost 45%. Finally, rate of judicial separate in Finland is constant in 2015 again and in Sweden it is first time below the 40 percent mark.
Overall, we can clearly seen from the given chart that onward 2013, a dramatic rise in divorce rate in Finland and on the other hand Sweden marked drop in judicial separation constantly at large rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, moreover, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82914572864 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90516350659 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2317040513 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.125 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247388243811 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120118423126 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742516101055 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159817064607 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660009142761 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.