You work for an international company and would like to spend 6 months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
1. Explain why you want to work in the companies head office for 6 months.
2. Say how your work could be done while you are away
3. Ask for his or her help in arranging it.
Dear Sir / madam
My name is Navjot Singh, employee ID number AD 2006 41 working as a sales engineer in your department. I am writing this letter to tell you that I want to work in the company's head office for 6 months. It will benefit me in numerous ways.
Firstly, working in the company head office give me a chance to corporate in international culture in and how to deal with international trading. In the addition, the upcoming workshop on trade facilitation which going to be held at headquarter give me more benefit in the field of export import. Secondly, more team skills and leadership qualities shall be enhanced in my working style and teaches me how to handle different difficult situations. Lastly, I can explain more to design team about configuration of software related to trade in rural areas of South Africa. Furthermore, during visit to headquarter I will handover my work to Mr Jones of sales department and I am wrapping current project in next week. Definitely, it will leave the burden of extra work from Mr Jones. Moreover, if Jones feel any issue during work he can email me I will resolve that problem.
I hope that you will definitely help me to get company approval for working in Headquarter and help me in the process of reimbursement during my visit. I will look forward to hearing from you a positive response. I am attaching my email ID with this letter.
Yours faithfully
Navjot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d in my working style and teaches me how to handle different difficult situations...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o hearing from you a positive response. I am attaching my email ID with this lett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78225806452 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80227484565 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584677419355 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9339651543 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279400230511 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098713960966 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110500410783 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210309232227 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912505244655 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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