The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about how many visitors in London went to four kinds of museums: History, National, British and Science from June to October.
Overall, over the period, the number of people visiting these museums fluctuated with two opposite trends: the History, National and Science Museum were downward; whereas, the British Museum was an upward trend.
In June, the data of Science Museum was the largest among four places, about over 400,000. This figure then went down slightly in the next two months before becoming most noticeable over the period of exactly 500,000 in August and then plummeted to almost half, reaching 300,000 in the last month given. The data of History and National Museum started at nearly 400,000 and approximately 250,000 consecutively. Both of the number of people visiting these museums hit the peak in August with 600,000 to History and well over 300,000 to National, following by the alleviation during the last two months.
In contrast to these three museums, the data of British Museum overall showed the growth. The figure remained relatively unchanged at just over 400,000 in the first two month. Similar to National Museum and History Museum, August also witnessed the most substantial upsurge in the number of visitors to British Museum to more than 700,000. It then decreased to around 450,000 in October and became the most popular destination in this month.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...d at just over 400,000 in the first two month. Similar to National Museum and History...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then, well, whereas, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43254555616 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534782608696 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3400445885 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133149511899 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593297505431 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502085790577 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993435512958 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300717526069 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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