Judiciary is the third wheel of democracy. It maintains the law and order in a country by sending the culprits behind the bars. However, some people believe that death penality is essential to control the crime in our society. I agree with this statement upto some extent.
First of all, this strict punishment will restrain the offenders as they will have a fear of loosing their life. In this way there will be less criminal activities in our surroundings. Moreover, it will eliminate the hardcore criminals like terrorists and serial killers which are major threat to our society.
Nextly, it will result into faster court decisions. Thus, people donot have to wait for a long time to get justice. It has been rightly said that "justice delayed is justice denied."
However, we cannot give this penality to everyone. Since the intention behind committing the crime should also be accounted before deciding the punishment. For instance, a person who kills somebody in a act of self defence cannont be treated as a murderer. Moreover, it will be not viable to give death penality to small offenders like chain snatchers, thief and other who create nuisanse.
To sum up, I can conclude that hard core criminals like terrorists should be hanged till death while other small criminals should be sent to rehablitation centres.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have needed' or 'need'?
Suggestion: have needed; need
...ple believe that death penality is must needed to control the crime in our society. I ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with this statement upto some extent. First of all, this strict punishment wil...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... cannot give this penality to everyone. Since the intention behind committing the cri...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tting the crime should also be accounted before deciding the punishment. For inst...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nstance, a person who kills somebody in a act of self defence cannont be treated ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thief
... to small offenders like chain snatchers,thief and other who create nuisanse. Final...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... other who create nuisanse. Finally, i can conclude that hard core criminals l...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247967479675 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.170731707317 0.155533422707 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0691056910569 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0528455284553 0.0501214627716 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0487804878049 0.0437548338989 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105691056911 0.122226691241 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0487804878049 0.0403226058552 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66457039017 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0325203252033 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0934959349593 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0487804878049 0.021408717616 228% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0121951219512 0.011925033212 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1366.0 1933.35771543 71% => OK
No of words: 219.0 316.048096192 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23744292237 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20517956788 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365296803653 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278538812785 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2100456621 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132420091324 0.137316102897 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66457039017 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.037074148 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 65.5440585617 60.7387585426 108% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4015503527 49.517814964 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0666666667 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 42.4538812785 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.4776119403 1.69124875643 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25952400272 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.079851322404 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0594834433542 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518558245547 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163948818121 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901620249374 0.134430193775 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586310007573 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.146411185903 0.324371583561 45% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0522001576372 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138781668897 0.228012699653 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787135156794 0.058150111329 135% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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