From a long time humans are harming flora and fauna and due to this reason many animal species are loosing their population and are at the danger of extinction. In this essay i am going to discuss the causes of this loss and the measures which can be taken to preserve wildlife.
The first and foremost reason behind this problem is hunting. People are killing animals for their own needs and deeds. This put these animals at the danger of extinction. In addition to this, people harm the natural habitat of wildanimals by cutting down the trees for the sake of development, which result into deforestation. Since people snatch their shelter and homes thats why they find it hard to survive and consequently die. Moreover, people use a lot of pesticides and insecticides which reaches into the food chain and ultimately harm animals.
Secondly, the pollution caused by mankind in water, air and land harm these creatures. For instance, the plastic disposed on land is eaten by some animals that leads to their death.
However, government should look after this issue and it should implement some strict laws against hunting and deforestation. Moreover, there should be more zoos and wildlife santuries to preserve animals from natural disasters and to increase their number through breeding.
At the end, I can conclude that animals play a indispensable role in our ecosystem and they rotate the food chain. So it is our duty to preserve these creatures instead of harming them.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280442804428 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.151291512915 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0479704797048 0.0946595960268 51% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0258302583026 0.0501214627716 52% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0516605166052 0.0437548338989 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114391143911 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0369003690037 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60297484 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332103321033 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00369003690037 0.00163938923432 225% => OK
Determiners: 0.107011070111 0.0861772015684 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0184501845018 0.021408717616 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0184501845018 0.011925033212 155% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1487.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 316.048096192 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99596774194 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358870967742 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258064516129 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157258064516 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104838709677 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60297484 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584677419355 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 59.3530936335 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7142857143 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8908648356 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 43.5207373272 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.88709677419 1.69124875643 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409079353652 0.332605444948 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0930189847932 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0442388837472 0.0668466124924 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.585020911069 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133171350011 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15721376909 0.134430193775 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630314484637 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.230820992322 0.324371583561 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.133241264568 0.0638462369009 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238443912482 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792863980679 0.058150111329 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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