The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1995 and 2002, and projections for 2050
The bar chart compares the proportion of the population in the world in four countries in 1950 and 2002, and the prediction for 2050.
It is clear that China and India have highest proportions of population in the period shown. In addition, the figure for Japan was the lowest.
In 1950, the proportion of China residents was highest, at nearly 25% of total global population, while the figure for India was slightly lower at 15%. At the same time, the figure for UAS and Japan was significantly lower, at over 5% and nearly 5% respectively.
In 2050, the proportion of the India population is expected to increase slowly to nearly 20% of total global population and become the highest figure in the chart. At the same time, the figure for the USA and Japan also are expected to slowly decrease to 5% and around 2% respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for China is expected to fall to 15%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
... It is clear that China and India have highest proportions of population in the period...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77707006369 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65179362171 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445859872611 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3821247458 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228465429514 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123303144249 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1514543055 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195906186705 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181274857939 0.0819641961636 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.