The bar chart shows the scores of teams A,B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about the points that team A,B and C have received during four different seasons in three year period.

First of all, it is clear from the data given that the team B was the most successful one among two other categories, with the highest point,82pt,being recorded in 2002. Moreover, team A was higher than team B, apart from 2002 and 2003, with 5pt and 11pt points respectively. In addition, the figure for team A has risen dramatically in 2004 with 35pt.

According to statistics, the scores of team B fell markedly from 82pt in 2002 to 43pt in 2004. However, the number has increased in 2005 to approximately 55pt. In contrast, team A scores have increased until 2004 with about 35pt and after this year the number fell dramatically to 8pt.

We can see immediately that points for team C indicates no overall pattern of increase or decrease. In fact, there is a fluctuation trend in this item. Team C has received lowest score at the end of the season with 5pt points.

The major conclusion that I have drawn using the pie chart is that team B was the most successful one in this analysis. Team A and C have quite similar scores in three year period, apart from 2004 that the points for team A have soared to up to 35pt.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , B
...information about the points that team A,B and C have received during four differe...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A score' or simply 'scores'?
Suggestion: A score; Scores
...o approximately 55pt. In contrast, team A scores have increased until 2004 with about 35...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'received the lowest'.
Suggestion: received the lowest
...ctuation trend in this item. Team C has received lowest score at the end of the season with 5pt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, in addition, in contrast, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56140350877 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59637268577 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521929824561 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5072641455 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146455325815 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609978517509 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524862445824 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101695107328 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556333630087 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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