The bar chart gives information about the points that team A,B and C have received during four different seasons in three year period.
First of all, it is clear from the data given that the team B was the most successful one among two other categories, with the highest point,82pt,being recorded in 2002. Moreover, team A was higher than team B, apart from 2002 and 2003, with 5pt and 11pt points respectively. In addition, the figure for team A has risen dramatically in 2004 with 35pt.
According to statistics, the scores of team B fell markedly from 82pt in 2002 to 43pt in 2004. However, the number has increased in 2005 to approximately 55pt. In contrast, team A scores have increased until 2004 with about 35pt and after this year the number fell dramatically to 8pt.
We can see immediately that points for team C indicates no overall pattern of increase or decrease. In fact, there is a fluctuation trend in this item. Team C has received lowest score at the end of the season with 5pt points.
The major conclusion that I have drawn using the pie chart is that team B was the most successful one in this analysis. Team A and C have quite similar scores in three year period, apart from 2004 that the points for team A have soared to up to 35pt.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , B
...information about the points that team A,B and C have received during four differe...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A score' or simply 'scores'?
Suggestion: A score; Scores
...o approximately 55pt. In contrast, team A scores have increased until 2004 with about 35...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'received the lowest'.
Suggestion: received the lowest
...ctuation trend in this item. Team C has received lowest score at the end of the season with 5pt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, in addition, in contrast, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56140350877 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59637268577 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521929824561 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5072641455 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146455325815 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609978517509 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524862445824 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101695107328 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556333630087 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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