carbon dioxide
This graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions for each person in these four countries from 1967 to 2007.The tones of carbon dioxide emissions for each had an increase in both Italy and Portugal ,while that in United Kingdom and Sweden had a decreasing trend in different levels.
Although the producing of carbon dioxide in United Kingdom had a smooth decline,from about 10.7 tones(1967) to 8.7 tones(2007),it was always the highest among the all four countries.
As for Sweden,whose average carbon dioxide emissions per person was about 8.7 tones at the beginning ,then came a constantly growth ,which reached the peak in 1977 (about 10.2 tones).Afterwards it had a dramatically drop ,whose emissions for each was nearly one second of the beginning at the end.
It was worth mentioning that the carbon dioxide emissions per person had a nearly twofold increase from 1967(about 4.2 tones) to 2007(about 7.8 tones).Similarly, the data in Portugal had a nearly three times ascend,which reached at nearly 6 tones in the end .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, similarly, so, then, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19760479042 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93021634021 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544910179641 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1646053731 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 217.0 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.75 22.9334400587 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.23603664747 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289359068727 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204006262717 0.103423049105 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608479810825 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204006262717 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608479810825 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.2329268293 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.