The changes in the Layout of the Woodwards University in not less than
Many changes have been made in over 30 years to alter the layout of the Woodwards University. The most significant one is the demolition of a few of the buildings, and the construction of new, open-spaced ones.
In the south-west area, the car park has been turned into a shuttle bus terminal, as well as the other smaller car park in the north-east area, that has been removed and replaced with a new lecture theatre. The road that used to run from one side to the other, in the middle of the campus, has been removed and substituted with different footpaths that connect the buildings.
Furthermore, the admin building, that once was placed in front of the car park in the south, had been moved slightly up north and reduced in size. At the very north-east of the campus, all the science laboratories have been moved all together inside a newly built building, instead of maintaining 3 separated blocks.
Lastly, opposite to the new science construction is the library, now larger in size and with its new IT center on the inside.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t footpaths that connect the buildings. Furthermore, the admin building, that on...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
...cience construction is the library, now larger in size and with its new IT center on the insid...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centers'?
Suggestion: centers
... now larger in size and with its new IT center on the inside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7032967033 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68581859836 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3813048755 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.285714286 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0488939179365 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314697357945 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770847950368 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385038805367 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666906773781 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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